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Monday, 14 December 2015

2015 Flox Class last BlogPost

This year has been so extreme and next year will be really really awesome with our new teacher so as we all  know that Mrs Kingston Mrs Write Miss German and Mrs Curtis are going to another schools Mrs Curtis and Mrs Kingston will be going to takanini where Mrs Aikman and their is some things i would like to share with you from this year well this year we have been making some Tapacloth let me show you a picture of a tapa loth.

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  This is a picture of a Tapa cloth.


This is the last Blog post for this year.

Friday, 4 December 2015

Remember poem




We have been learning about Remember Poetry.

Thursday, 26 November 2015

WALT use precise nouns to add detail to our reader.

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food  grocery   . We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll barbie and a soft toy  teddy bear. After that we went to the shop shopping center to buy some clothes, I got two new items neck less and a pair of shoes slippers. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop  countdown to buy a ice block treat. Lucky me!

Cyber smart Consequence map


In Flox class we have been learning what to do when some one is doing something bad ,or
when they are watching something inappropriate.

Friday, 13 November 2015

HPS Student led Toolkit

       

This is about what things i learned and thing i liked. At the HPS student Toolkits

Tuesday, 3 November 2015

Rugby World Cup 4 Sentence Recount

WALT: recount an event in just 4 sentences

Yesterday we wrote about the rugby world cup , because the All Blacks Won!

Thursday, 15 October 2015

Blog comment

Today i was learning to make a positive blog comment with Mr Hopkins .
Here is my presentasion for some tips for blog commenting can you find out witch blog i have posted on?

Friday, 25 September 2015

End of term reflection

This term we have been learning about the past and why it is important. In Flox class we have focused a lot on art and the way art is used to tell stories.
This is my word cloud that shows my ideas about art and how it tells stories.

Comic strip

Thursday, 24 September 2015

Rugby world cup




We have been learning over the past days we have been learning about the Rugby world cup

Friday, 21 August 2015

Camp Movies

This week we have been using the ipad to make a trailer.

Tuesday, 11 August 2015

Wednesday, 22 July 2015

Term 3

This term i am looking forward to is learning new things in other classes.

Because i get to learn more than one thing but more than one thing i know lots of things. 

Wednesday, 1 July 2015

The best day EVER!!!

                                                               
                                                                   
Yesterday was the best day ever!!! In the Afternoon the netball team have made a choice and they choice a challenge so the challenge was to vs so of the teachers.

The teams were called the Big Hawks VS Blue Hawks.

Wednesday, 10 June 2015

the phases of the moon

Explanation writing

WALT: I am learning to write an explanation.

Success criteria
Me
LB
T
I have used an interesting title that tells the reader what my writing is about
yes

Y
I have used a general statement to introduce the topic
yes

Y
My writing explains how one thing leads to another
yes


I have used time connectives to show the order of the process (first...next…)
yes


I have organised my text using paragraphs
yes


I have linked together 2 or 3 sentences to show cause and effect (so…if…this causes...this makes...because)
yes


I have used technical vocabulary
yes


I have used capital letters, full stops and commas
yes
yes


Use this chart to help you to write an explanation on the 8 phases of the Moon.




The phases of the Moon

The fantastic moon.

Have you ever wondered why the Moon can look different every night? There are eight key phases that the Moon goes through every 29.5 days, which is the same as one month.

The Moon orbit the Earth 29 days. As the Moon orbit the Earth it changes shape night. Some people think that every single friday or saturday it will be a full Moon. First there is New Lunar or Moon, then the waxing crescent, after that is the first quarter then a full Moon. After the full Moon is a waning gibbous. Then the last quarter. At the last part is the last waning crescent.


We see the same side of the Moon every day and night. You can see the outline of The new Moon just a little bit. Some people thinks we see different sides of the Moon but we actually see the same side of the Moon.

Monday, 25 May 2015

All about Saturn

information Report


Take a photo of your plan us
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Success Criteria
Clear categories with subtitles
Self
LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction

Use sentences and paragraphs

Use facts to inform the reader

Use different sentence starters

Use VCOP


Start writing here…


title: marvelous saturn


introduction
  • saturn has about 62 moons in the solar system
Appearance paragraph 1
  • saturn looks like hot brown and light brown and a little bit green.

paragraph 2
  • The rings on Saturn are made from rock ice and dust.


paragraph 3
  • Storm winds face around the atmosphere at about 800 kg /p  



+what it looks like?
  • it looks brown a little bit green and saturn has rings the color of brown and it is the shape of a ball.


conclusion
  • I wrote about Saturn because it looks like an interesting planet and it is about 1,427 million km from the sun.
 

these rocks are left over from small moon that broke apart long ago.




Thursday, 14 May 2015

All about me

Hi my name is Peeana and this is my all about me. Welcome to my blog